I have to admit, I wasn't too sure about your agents at first. But they're definitely growing on me. Not only that, but the mission was both tremendously entertaining and very well put together.

The one qualm I have is that there are occasional stretches where your agents just stand around and complain. Once or twice is okay, but it started to wear on me the further along things went. Maybe try to spice things up with a bit more banter next time.

Other than that, this was great. Kudos!

I must immediately brainstorm as to exactly what genophase does. We got geno- for the genome, obviously, and -phase as in a distinctive form. Maybe it liquefies your genome? That sounds pretty fatal, though. Not something that there could be a cure for. Anyone want to chime in with ideas?


Also, what's going to happen to the hybrid? Will he/she/it/whatever be available as an NPC in the Nursery? What would a quarian/human hybrid look like, anyway?

That was a stupid fic. I'm not a fan of crossoverships to begin with and this had all the worst traits of the species.

By the way, when I read the title and the ... um ... second title? What are these things called? Anyway, where it says 'In which romance is approached way too quickly' I thought there was going to be something about Maria. ^^