Subject: Re: First mission!
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Posted on: 2011-08-01 05:09:00 UTC
That was fun! I like your agents' personalities. One thing you might want to keep in mind for future missions: it's usually easier to read when the parts quoted from the badfic look different from the parts you wrote--italicized, underlined, whatever.
I finally got to writing this...
https://sites.google.com/site/responsecenter27/home/luke
Oh, and mini-Rayquazas Conalave, Conlave, Oreburg, Pigeott, Plussle, and Sunnyshore, as well as George the Eevee and Luna the Starly (who has the power to change into a blur of silver), are up for adoption.
EEVEES ARE MY FAVORITE POKEMON EVER. EVER. It's sad Sues abuse them so much. I might borrow George if no one else is interested in him, though I probably won't because I already have a mini I'm quite happy with. *Hugs sparkle wolf* Hope he finds a good home however. c:
Oh, and lovely mission by the way! The only problem I'd have with it is what Doc said, but besides that, I can't wait to read more. :D
That was fun! I like your agents' personalities. One thing you might want to keep in mind for future missions: it's usually easier to read when the parts quoted from the badfic look different from the parts you wrote--italicized, underlined, whatever.
Could you please change the background or the text color so it's easier to read?