Subject: Not sure what you're asking
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Posted on: 2011-07-28 02:34:00 UTC

Yeah. I take it from the last bit you're looking for suggestions, so I'll just work with that.

-The idea of the corrupting influence of the unicorn's power is good. I was going to say "no, this can never work" but saying that it's beauty and so on and suchlike a really a form of insidious mind control is very appropriate to the universe. It's less overt than almost everything else, but cosmic horror is under no obligation to be subtle.

-Sanity would take a hit from encountering it for two reasons. First, the contrast with reality: the incorruptible pure pureness that the unicorn embodies is as alien to normal human existence as any (other) eldritch abomination. Second, this thing wrecks your will. Given the nature of the CoC universe, once it sinks it's claws into you, that's a chunk of your self-determination you ain't getting back. Breaking away from it would probably induce profound feelings of loss and despair- if you've ever seen Angel, think what happened when people got severed from Jasmine, only make it permanent.

-The community you've outlined would have a growth rate that's far too high to be practical. Living in an edenic paradise with no birth control and minimal inhibitions would have the birth rate sky-high even without abductions. Also, frankly, there aren't enough downsides; considering what an absolute sea of frack living in the CoC universe is, people giving up their wills to this *thing* in exchange for corporeal paradise seems pretty reasonable. I'd expand the centrality of the unicorn in the whole thing. If exposure to it damages your mind, then if any of it's wild children become mentally separated from it, they should die.

-You could also make it a honey pot. According to folklore, unicorns only have an affinity for virgins. This could make the unicorn into something fairly nightmarish: it draws in children who are abused, hurt, and so on, raises them in eternal spring, slowly devouring their minds with it's own. Then, when they lose their virginity (which they have no reason not to do) it withdraws, leaving them lobotomized or dead.

Sorry, that rambled a bit. Just a few thoughts.

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