Hi. I'm working on my first mission, and I have a few questions about the fic I've chosen for it. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5763760/1/Kiayas_Journey

First off, it was suggested to me that this might be a trollfic. I'm not entirely sure how you spot a trollfic, so could I get a second opinion from someone else? Part of me is convinced that this is so bad it has to be that way on purpose, but some of the author's notes have me pretty convinced this is an English girl of roughly 16 writing one of the most blatant 'Sues it has ever been my misfortune to find.

Secondly, the level of bad here is making it hard to find a good point to just kill her off at. She destroys the canon from chapter one, has terrible spelling, grammar, and characterization....and it's consistent. Near the end she starts dropping blatant hints that she's turning into/is the "Spirit of Fire," but will that work? Or should I just wait until the end, and kill her?

Speaking of the end....is there a limit on how long a mission can be? Could I split this into several parts, like three or four? It's a twenty-nine chapter fic with mostly long chapters (though there are those chapters purely for paragraph-long a/ns). I really want to spork this particular fic for my first one, but is it too much for a first-timer like me?