Typo - PPC Posting Board

Permission Request 1.1 by Myrtle Tamlane on 2011-07-19 21:04:00 UTC Reply

I posted this almost 3 weeks ago, but I don't think any PG's noticed because it was right before the Badfic Game started. In any case, there were no responses about the agents, so I made only minor changes.

Agent profiles: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17K0jrHljemPbY8qGoa1YPO9cQo7TZtrQ74WReoMw1IE/edit?hl=enUS&authkey=CKOriOUN#

Writing sample (One agent's recruitment to the PPC): <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1prqfxRpTieb2HdFGtUhzh495iVbOmJXIhdgxmlB4nI/edit?hl=enUS&authkey=CNPYz6wI">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1prqfxRpTieb2HdFGtUhzh495iVbOmJXIhdgxmlB4nI/edit?hl=enUS&authkey=CNPYz6wI#

(Actually, I also wrote another version before the above. I don't like it quite as well, but here it is anyway: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iDeUn2rWPKwlqyhMhFYfQzQBFah1Hdf9NuQxdIi-ors/edit?hl=enUS&authkey=CIz3970G">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iDeUn2rWPKwlqyhMhFYfQzQBFah1Hdf9NuQxdIi-ors/edit?hl=enUS&authkey=CIz3970G# )

For Kagami and Jack's first mission, I would like to claim "Brotherly Love," an Inheritance Cycle badfic: <a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4895130/1/BrotherlyLove">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4895130/1/BrotherlyLove

I would also like to tentatively claim "SexyNoJutsu Gone Wrong" for a future mission, because it's horrible and needs to die, but I thought it might drive Kagami insane on her first mission. Link: <a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3925071/1/SexyNoJutsuGoneWrong">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3925071/1/SexyNoJutsuGone_Wrong

Please give concrit on whatever you feel like reading (there's sort of a lot here).

Thanks!

So, about that... by Makari on 2011-07-26 04:54:00 UTC Reply

... Permission granted. :)

I don't recognize you much beyond 'she's been around', so it might behoove you to interact more? But that's a bit of pot and kettle on my part, so, moving on.

On the subject of writing, your Agents look viable, and your sample is both sound and entertaining. I liked how you treated the subject matter, and there were no errors so glaring as to shock me out of the story. (If you want detailed concrit, I'd be happy to provide it, but as it is I don't want to be too long-winded for a congratulatory type of post.)

So, stick around, good luck, and happy writing!

Yay! by Myrtle Tamlane on 2011-07-26 16:46:00 UTC Reply

Detailed concrit would be lovely, especially since my normal beta-reader is taking a vacation from the Internet this summer.

Thank you!

Typo by Krzysztof Drewniak on 2011-07-20 14:12:00 UTC Reply

'Everything she glossed over is probably bit fuzzy.”'

Should be:

'Everything she glossed over is probably a bit fuzzy.”'

Oops. Fixed. by Myrtle Tamlane on 2011-07-20 17:27:00 UTC Reply

Thanks for pointing that out.