Subject: Permission granted!
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Posted on: 2011-06-29 17:25:00 UTC

I don't know Homestruck, so I'm trusting Firebird's enthusiasm to tell me all's well there.

Aside from a few miscellaneous technical errors, I didn't see any problems in either writing sample, and I like the idea that Tethra can't hear the Flowers. I also really want to see that paintbrush in action, because it sounds like a neat idea. Thus, go forth and spork, and be merry!

Oh, and don't worry about the portal malfunction thing. Every other character arrives by a plothole of some sort--the other ones are recruited directly--so it's not a big deal if you don't change it. Almost nobody gets here on purpose. {= )

~Neshomeh

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