Subject: Re: Mission: DMS- NCIS -T/PG-13
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Posted on: 2011-06-13 00:56:00 UTC
Good job. I don't know the NCIS canon very well, but hey, seeing the demise of Stus is always entertaining.
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Mission: DMS- NCIS -T/PG-13 by
on 2011-06-12 20:59:00 UTC
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Lee and Ian find out just what happens when Abby's New Partner arrives on the scene in their newest mission to the NCIS 'Verse.
One mini was found, and is up for adoption:
mini-Gibbs: Gibbs team -
Well sporked by
on 2011-06-13 23:04:00 UTC
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Sigh this might be one of the best examples of why stus can hurt so much. Different to sues just enough so I'm not as desensitised. On the plus side this lead to the mini-Gibbs dope slap which is possibly the greatest event to occur in a mission.
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I know it's dead but... by
on 2011-06-13 22:39:00 UTC
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Whenever I read of a form of sue death that doesn't involve complete destructuion of the body, I get nervous. I always think their powers will include being able to shrug off C4.
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But otherwise... by
on 2011-06-14 01:54:00 UTC
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Great Job! I utterly loved this. Though part of me wanted to headdesk when I read the hippie child's dialouge.
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I know ... by
on 2011-06-15 12:23:00 UTC
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I had to reread that part looking for the 'spirituality' (and never found it).
Ian should count his blessings that Lee's a mellow drunk. I've known cats who got delusions of tigerhood on fresh catnip, if she had that type of reaction he would have been trying to restrain a buzzsaw.
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Very well done. by
on 2011-06-13 09:58:00 UTC
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I forgot to say it while betaing... nice job! Also, Lee's quite of a different person when she drinks too much mint tea...
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Re: Mission: DMS- NCIS -T/PG-13 by
on 2011-06-13 00:56:00 UTC
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Good job. I don't know the NCIS canon very well, but hey, seeing the demise of Stus is always entertaining.
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Nice mission! by
on 2011-06-12 23:24:00 UTC
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Honestly, I'm a little annoyed that a thirteen year old can do all that jazz. It's not as bad as people making life-changing decisions at six years old, but still, it's pareety bad.
Good sporking, man! Also, MLP is awesome! =D -
Good job! by
on 2011-06-12 22:54:00 UTC
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The exact place in the text, that broke my brain:
'"So I could help understand what happened," Samantha said, "I'm still learning like Zane did, I have a little process, man. Big bro and I will have the heavy jazz picked outta the garden of the case and search out the vibes of a connection, you dig?"
The team was surprised to hear a girl Samantha's age speaking with that much spirituality.'
I wish we had bleeproducts here on World One.
Anyway, just wanted to congratulate you on a job well done.