Subject: Sorry for the long wait...
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Posted on: 2011-06-08 08:57:00 UTC
been busy with my final exams, so haven't had much time. However, I have read it through a few times, and I haven't found anything wrong with the story, neither plot, gramma nor canon. It was defiently an enjoyable read :)
Keep it up ;)
The fic being missioned is NSFW, and probably NSFB, but the mission itself is NSFW, due mainly to excerpts from the fic. If anyone would like to help, that would be most appreciated.
I can beta for you for grammar/spelling, can't really do anything for you as far as plot because I'm wholly unfamiliar with the Stargate universe.
I'm familiar with both the SGA and SG:SG1 serie
Here's the GoogleDoc address: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YTIH_nvmJG6CqMjBAKCNzD9Ie-mXu3g3cOYOAti4YmY/edit?hl=en&authkey=CN3V8LMH
been busy with my final exams, so haven't had much time. However, I have read it through a few times, and I haven't found anything wrong with the story, neither plot, gramma nor canon. It was defiently an enjoyable read :)
Keep it up ;)