I would probably be better able to tell out of characterness for this story, what with my literal days of playtime for World of Warcraft, if I actually paid attention to the story in it.

Of course, the story for Wow involves doing all of the big dungeon raids which I never got very far in.

...That just sounds bad.

So, yeah...only skimmed the first chapter and I can already tell you that the canons are badly out of character. They all speak and act like they are five years old (no offense intended to any five-year-olds who may be reading this). This includes the idea that your first attempt to defend your city should be for your leaders to charge blindly into the opposing army (which also happens to be headed by almost every leader of the other faction, for some reason).

Also, the spelling, punctuation, and grammar are frelled.

And as for ReginaTheNinja's question: You cannot be a different race than your biological siblings in any world that I am aware of. It has more to do with the Sue wanting to be extra special than it does with Warcraft.

Wow, that sounds painful. I don't really know anything about World of Warcraft, but how could she be a different species than her brother?

...and even I think that this fic is colossally bad. I mean, seriously!

Goodness. If I didn't have a mission in the works, I'd totally take this. >_>;

It's pretty horrible.