Kinda reminds me of the Fill the Plotholes I did with Nume and Cameo back when I was just starting to wrap my head around the idea of writing missions--only this is much, much better constructed. Seconding the love for Jack. It's not easy to make something like a zombie adorable, but you've done it!

The idea that the canons might be aware of the wrongness while being forced to act against their natures is creepy, and definitely reinforces the PPC's purpose. It's cool to get an outside perspective on the agents as much as the "badfic," too.

~Neshomeh

I know others have said this already, but the POV shift made this mission very entertaining. It would be fun to see different canon characters' reactions to the madness going on around them during a badfic.

Sad to say, I would probably be a lot better at L4D in this Suefluenced, where-are-all-the-zombies? version...

I especially like how you did it from the canon's POV, that was a nice change of pace.

I don't even know Left 4 Dead, but I love this.

I gotta write some Parody Sue stuff myself at some point when my exams are over. Tell me if you wanna join in, I'd love your expertise :)

I loved it. You did great.

Different, but fun to read. And my fondness for Jack just keeps growing. He's so crazy and weirdly adorable, and makes me giggle. XD