Are you having fun? Because I can't tell. I know you've been around a while, but I can't recall seeing you in many threads, and the writing sample seems pretty ho-hum to me. I didn't really notice anything that sets your characters apart from the general milieu--though I suppose it doesn't help that the "badfic" was pre-made for the purpose, which strikes me as bit silly. You even posted your mood as "blah" on the sample. Overall, I'm just looking for any sign that you're really into doing this, and I'm not seeing it. (This is to say nothing of a variety of little errors I did see, like a Tolkien elf saying "Oh my Eru" or putting commas outside the quotes after dialogue lines that already have other end-punctuation.) So, uh, what's up?

~Neshomeh