Subject: More Yu-Gi-Oh badfic
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Posted on: 2011-04-19 20:38:00 UTC
http://fanfiction.net/s/456554/1/
I suppose it could be worse, but still...
The basic plot is that after the ending of the show, Bakura shows up in the afterlife and brings Atem back to Domino City. It turns out that Zorc is back and is ticked off at Bakura, so Bakura wants everyone to help him fight Zorc, who is now in the 21st century. They agree, since nobody particularly wants the world to get destroyed. That makes sense, right? Well, then we find out Bakura's OTHER reason for wanting everyone's help: Zorc has kidnapped his beloved little sister. This sister of his is a Mary Sue, everyone seems to jump in and out of character, after a few chapters the story randomly shifts to script format, the punctuation sucks, and the author is clearly a Bakura fan, and the favoritism is a bit annoying. Also, Zorc is spelled as "Zork" for the first half of the story (the author starts spelling it "Zorc" halfway through a chapter, too, and doesn't bother to go back and change the spelling in the first half of the chapter.)