Subject: Er, hi there.
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Posted on: 2011-04-12 05:48:00 UTC
Unfortunately, I'm giving this a No, at least for the time being. Although your grammar and spelling is decent, your agents don't seem to have much of the lighthearted humor vibe that we try for, generally speaking. Honestly, I didn't feel your characters really had enough depth to make for a good spin-off - your characterization of the Marquis de Sod also felt somewhat off. I would recommend reading more spin-offs in that Department to gain more of a feel of his personality. This is not a permanent denial, and you're welcome to try again when you feel you have a better handle on the air of the PPC. Like I said, definitely recommend reading more spin-offs, especially in the Department of Floaters. Good luck with further fanfiction efforts, and on your next application!