I've gotten a new mission typed up (actually finished it before I wrote my second mission, but that's irrelevant), and I'm a little less confident on this one than I have been on my past two. I think I'd like at least a few betas to look at this one, so if anyone thinks they'll have the time, go ahead and leave a comment, and I'll email the doc over. (I could also make a GoogleDoc, if anyone prefers.)

I know it's not really a popular game, but I'm pretty confident on my canon details. (The badfic being sporked pretty much glosses over canon anyway.) It's more character interactions and my treatment of the mission itself I'm looking for feedback about.