Subject: Depends
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Posted on: 2011-04-05 18:39:00 UTC

What sort of problems are there other than "bad dialogue"? Because that sounds more like a problem for concrit than anything else. Like, are there any major canon breaches, or things of that nature?

Alternatively, I'd be happy to take a look at the fic and give you my opinion if you want to email me a link to it.

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