Subject: Re: Plugging Rooney's second DOI report.
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Posted on: 2013-05-11 14:32:00 UTC
It's good to see a DoI mission dealing with not-so-badfic. It's the one Department that would go through everything, goodfic and bad, but thus far I've not seen it cover anything that isn't mission-quality badfic already. That trend seems a bit against its potential, in my opinion.
I liked how Rooney's personality came through in the report. There were several spots where I could easily picture his reactions to fic events and his subsequent attempts to put them into words, which was good because just about any mental image of an Eldar muttering to himself and crossing things out on a notepad is a good mental image.
I have one notable typo to report, though: in "(or un-reubttaled, if that’s a word)", "un-reubttaled" should be "un-rebuttaled", even though that isn't actually a real word. Approximations deserve proper spelling, too!