Subject: Good job!
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Posted on: 2010-12-31 19:42:00 UTC
I really like both your agents and missions. Keep going this way!
Subject: Good job!
Author:
Posted on: 2010-12-31 19:42:00 UTC
I really like both your agents and missions. Keep going this way!
An Axel!Sue (yes, I said SUE) is hardly the most horrifying thing Danny and Laura face in their last compulsory mission with Cornelius and the DIAU.
Warning: slightly NSFB in places.
http://vgdivision.livejournal.com/4178.html
“Go to hell, Danny.”
“What happened? You run into Lux or something? Did she have a thing for greasy red-headed nerdy boys?”
“I’m carrying weapons, you know.”
ROFL
I don't always understand the missions to video game worlds as much as someone who actually plays the games would, but I do like your characters. They have great interaction.
I especially liked all three's reactions to the singing.
I really like both your agents and missions. Keep going this way!
I honestly don't understand how people come up with stuff like this. Can't they just write their own names in instead of canon names? Or do they just like the appearance of the fandom characters and so want to use them instead of creating their own?
It baffles me. I'm not surprised the Fem!Axel!Sue got snuffed when she did.
It's sorta sad to be (possibly) seeing the end of Cornelius, but as you said, we might be surprised. I enjoyed reading Cornelius's actions, his voice of reason to Dany and Laura's attitudes was a fun contrast.