Most of you probably don't remember me considering how long its been since I've posted here, well I do things slowly. As such I fully realize that its going to be a good long time before I submit my entrance thingy (I can't remember the name right now and I'm too lazy to look it up at the moment)

At any rate, the reason I have posted is because on another site I posted the prologue and first chapter of my own original story. Here's hoping you all enjoy it or at the very least can offer me constructive criticism on it.

http://coloholics.net/index.php?showtopic=29671&pid=269648&st=0entry269648