Subject: I caught my first Sue!
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Posted on: 2010-11-19 23:02:00 UTC
Or at least I think so. Maybe you want to take a look at this, but I advise NSFB.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5343123/1/Beyond_Love
Contains:
- An OC who everyone wants to rape
- totally assholes secondary characters
- Out of character canon
And all of this just in two chapters, so I'm not sure if I want to go further.
Also, I gets worse. It has a prequel.
For Death Note continuum.
Well, have fun killing this abomination. 0P
Okay, I admit, I'm not that familiar with the Death Note canon and I didn't know BB, but this seems ridiculous. Is he really that obsessed about jam? He sounds like a mere lunatic in this fic.
But I'm certainly sure BB isn't meant to hit anyone to get jam, he's more likely "I'll go and buy it, I'm not that badass"
All in all, the BB in this fic doesn't really sound like the one from Death Note. Except for the jam, which looks heavily overexaggerated.
Yep, apart from the OC who everyone wants to rape for apparently no reason, BB seems much more maniac and happy to kill than what he is supposed to be, and I agree that the jam issue is overexaggerated. Do you know if someone in the PPC works in DN continuum? If not this fic is mine (of course if I get premission)
*permission, sorry for that
In fact, have you ever seen even a bit of Death Note? The way L liked sweets is supposed to be the way BB liked strawberry jam, but the point is that he randomly kills people but he isn't able to do it. Do you know even a little of Death Note? so it can be easier to explain