Do these qualify as badfic? by
Altruis
on 2010-11-14 05:48:00 UTC
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The first charged fic:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5812973/1/MetroidtheGensokyoProject
It's a crossover between Touhou and Metroid, which itself is a problem. The entire Touhou cast is also massively OOC, even by that fandom's standards, and it directly contradicts canon multiple times. On top of that, it has several characters randomly go insane and attack people, and is written entirely in beige prose.The author even gives descriptions of canon characters in said beige prose, which are so general that anyone familiar with the respective canon already knew everything stated.
The second charged fic:
<a href="http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6254920/1/FromtheSkyandBeyond">http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6254920/1/FromtheSkyand_Beyond
From just the first chapter, I see a VERY obvious Stu. He can resurrect if killed, is strong enough to kill guys in powered armor(which doesn't exist in canon) with a few punches, looks 20 while actually being 1500, and various other offenses. Beyond the Stu, the story has either made a canon character look massively older or contains lime-level lolicon, as well as worse than usual fanboy Japanese.
If anyone decides to do a mission in either of these, its important to note that characters being mildly OOC and/or something being different from canon is acceptable in the Touhou fandom. Major discrepancies are not allowed, but minor changes the author likes tend to become canon. It is also important to realize that Touhou characters tend to make god mode sues look weak. All of the named characters from Harry Potter combined might be able to beat one of the weaker Touhou characters. Any agent attempting to enter the continuity should prepare accordingly.