Subject: Pleased to meet you.
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Posted on: 2010-11-07 21:39:00 UTC
I think you may be confused as to what you are actually looking for. It seems to me that you are asking for your story to be used in a mission, which is a strange request.
Now, what you might actually need is a Beta-reader. That is a service that we, as well as others on the internet, provide where someone reads your story and offers suggestions about how you might make the story better. We would point out things like spelling, punctuation, and grammar as well as the aforementioned Mary Sue's and Marty Stu's. Then you take the suggestions and use them as a tool to edit your story and increase the quality.
Anyways, if you are interested in finding a Beta, I am sure that someone around here would be willing to help.
Have a nice day,
-Phobos