I want to apologize for not having read your missions before this. I just finished all of them, and they are great. I loved the crazy CADS from the earlier missions. I don't know Happy Tree Friends at all, but those replacement Evil Flippy badfics were awful. The missions were funny, though.

After I caught up on reading them, I can much better understand Deuce's statement to Caleb at the beginning of this one. Why would someone think that was a good idea?

I loved the scene Adder walked in on at the end of this fic--especially since it was just ten minutes later. Lucifer should be a very interesting addition to the RC. Oh, and poor Kieran! I think Molly traumatized him.

I really like how harmoniously Caleb and Deuce work together (that is to say, hardly at all).

I want to hug Jack. I really, really do.

I've got to hand it to you: When I first read that Caleb would be a Twilight-pire, I thought it would be all jokes about sparkling and romance. But you've managed to write a convincingly strong and frightening vampire and agent character. So kudos for that!

I don't mean to nag you or anything, but don't forget to put your mission up on the Wiki's main page. More people might notice and read it that way, and get to know your work.

Y'know, just saying.

Down with it, I say!

Ye gods, such complete lack of common sense should not go unpunished. And it hasn't. Yay!

Seriously now, I'm definitely not an expert when it comes to this fandom, but even I could tell canon was way out of whack. Give the characters different names, and no-one would ever recognize them.

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That last sentence applies to practically all badfic, huh?

Love your new agents, by the way. Zombies are funny.

Indeed, the lack of spacing on certain parts of the fic was quite distracting to my eyes.

Anyway, I hope to see more missions on the agents that you've introduce.