(Is it just me, or is the title bar getting shorter and shorter?)

Anyway, I wrote a fic for yuri_challenge on LJ; it's for Avatar: The Last Airbender, Azula/Katara, to the prompt "With your hands marooned so freshly red/you'd wrap your lips around my neck." The result is a little over 2,000 words; it is an AU. It contains graphic foreplay and cutaway-but-sex-happened bits; one of the participants is (basically) mind-controlled at the time. There isn't any actual graphic sex. It also has some minor incestuous subtext, but it isn't being portrayed as a good or healthy or otherwise OK thing. The whole story is meant to be more than a little messed-up, actually. There's also violence, and heaps upon heaps of Azula being controlling and manipulative.

I like how it came out, but of course, I need help polishing it up. I'd really appreciate it if anyone would be willing to do such a thing. *cough* Also, I'm working under an October 1 deadline.