I like it by
Miah
on 2010-09-17 04:13:00 UTC
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That is a really nice DIC mission. It was very neat and tidy! Will Sedri be in DIC for a while now? That seems to be a very under served Department, in general, so it will be nice to be seeing missions in it.
Susan/Legolas?! It had better be a painful death... by
Aeidhryn
on 2010-09-16 22:41:00 UTC
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...meh, I know you won't disappoint.
Susan/Legolas, the nerve!
Yeah! by
Sister-to-the-Queen
on 2010-09-16 20:24:00 UTC
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I like this. Your agents are both just edgy enough around each other to make it interesting. And I adored that last line. Damn consoles...
And this fic. Jeeze. Honestly, what is it with Suethors and their belief that sex leads to love, instead of the other way around? I'm glad you killed it, I really am.
Well done. by
Phobos
on 2010-09-16 20:05:00 UTC
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I like this pair. It seems to me that most of their problems stem from a failure in communication, which is always a good way to inject some tension into a relationship.
Keep it up and I look forward to their next mission.
-Phobos
Nice work! by
Neshomeh
on 2010-09-16 19:01:00 UTC
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Welcome to the ranks of the Untanglers! You lucked out--my boys have never had a mission go that smoothly. ^_~ I guess it helps that there was a minimum of the completely nonsensical, and that both agents knew what they were doing. Still, that definitely needed to be sorted out. There are some things that you just can't get away with in Tolkienverse, or Narnia, for that matter. The blasphemy against Eru really clinched it for me. {= P
I look forward to more of this partnership. It's kind of like two notes that are a little too close together to harmonize, creating tension. I enjoyed it.
~Neshomeh
I really enjoyed reading that :) by
KsandraMallan
on 2010-09-16 18:57:00 UTC
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It was a nice change in pace from all the Sue slaughter (not like Sue-slaughter's a bad thing, mind you).
Heheh by
The 9th Blue Mage
on 2010-09-16 04:54:00 UTC
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Looks like Sedri (The character) might get use to tidy missions like this one.