Subject: Commas
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Posted on: 2010-09-03 16:09:00 UTC
Oh mine are terrible. I try to be kind to them but they need to be used in ways I just don't understand.
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Calling for a beta. by
on 2010-09-03 15:17:00 UTC
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I need somebody to help with my Agents character sheet and intro. Help and I will reward you by writing missions.
http://jakraziel.livejournal.com/695.html The summary.
http://jakraziel.livejournal.com/852.html The Intro. -
Alright. by
on 2010-09-03 16:48:00 UTC
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Forewarning: I know absolutely nothing about the canon. You'll need a second beta for that. But I will help you out with grammar, spelling where you're speaking English (and possibly Spanish!), and syntax in general.
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I need somebody to help with my Agent's character sheet and intro. Help, and I will reward you by writing missions.
Just let me know what exactly you're looking for. Do you want me to go over it with a basic red pen and fix extra/missing commas, add capitals where necessary, etc? Or would you like me to actually dive in and edit the thing? Because I can do both, but it's good to know what you're looking for, first. -
The latter please by
on 2010-09-03 17:57:00 UTC
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Don't worry about the cannon, its not really delved into in these. As for dealing with my grammar and syntax, where have you been all my life.
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Cool, then. by
on 2010-09-04 05:25:00 UTC
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My e-mail address is just this username at gmail.com. Whatever you've got, send it there-- as an MS Word attachment would be best.
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Sorry I can't by
on 2010-09-03 15:49:00 UTC
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I'm sorry that I can't help you with this, but I am no good at grammar and punctuation issues. My own commas need to be herded to safety before I can post stories. I hope you find someone soon.