Subject: To quote Ghastly's Ghastly Comic ...
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Posted on: 2010-08-27 21:43:00 UTC
... DEAR SWEET MOTHER OF GOD NOOOOOO!
Ahem. Nice mission, and yay for Molly and Moses! Poor Kieran's gonna be wondering what hit him for a while.
Why, yes it could! At long last, I finally buckled down and finished this mission.
http://rc6664.webs.com/mission5.htm
While Adder recuperates from the last mission, Deuce teams up with Kestrel and Mordecai against the horror of the Dark Lady Jane, formerly known as... Hermione Granger?
... DEAR SWEET MOTHER OF GOD NOOOOOO!
Ahem. Nice mission, and yay for Molly and Moses! Poor Kieran's gonna be wondering what hit him for a while.
Its like the arthor didn't read the books but instead had them explained by someone who a little drunk. Thing like this make me wonder how medical see the world. From their point of view they just recived a patient in that condition with no explaination at all.
She just believes that Harry Potter is an epic larger than any one author (including J.K. Rowling) and therefore every author's interpretation is valid. Yes, in this author's mind, this is actually CANON.
One of the very few authors at least as unpleasant as the Sue.
Cripes, that Suethor's note! Somebody doesn't quite understand the meaning of the term 'Mary Sue.' Or basic tact and diplomacy, for that matter.
Anyway, very nice work! The agent interactions were fantastic and I'm looking forward to what you'll do next.
...And it looks just as bad as it sounds.
So many things wrong with that fic. Dark!Hermione!? "M--b----s" who lose duels getting their powers confiscated!? I thought the idea of power-stealing was only part of Umbridge's conspiracy theory! And that spell! What. The. ...?
And did anyone else catch the Suethor's name? pstibbons, I presume named for Ponder? I doubt the actual Ponder Stibbons will be amused.