Subject: Mission Assessment
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Posted on: 2010-08-18 17:59:00 UTC
Hey there,
Just read your mission and don't worry, it is not boring.
I especially enjoyed the snappy dialogue between the agents.
Gotta love that swear jar.
Sister-to-the-Queen
Mission Title: Halloween
Canon: Buffy the Vampire Slayer/The West Wing/Star Wars
Rating: T, for swears
Agents: Callahan, K. and Trevelyan, A.
Target: Jade Bartlet
Word Count: 4,577
Source Summary: The youngest Bartlet daughter OC goes to visit a friend on Halloween. A friend who happens to live in Sunnydale, CA.
Warning: This fic contained severe amounts of boring. I hope the mission spiced it up some. Click here, if you're brave enough.
Like everyone else, I agree that the mission was fun, not boring, and the swear jar is an excellent idea. Of course it would be Bleeprin. It's practically currency around HQ anyway, being the only countable commodity widely available and yet rare and valuable enough to serve.
... Now I'm imagining Medical and FicPsych in the role of banks. This could get complicated. {X D
Anyway, good mission. Not knowing much about either of the main canons involved didn't seem to hinder me at all, which is always a good thing.
~Neshomeh
...or cool spoils from missions (like Jay's lightsaber in TOS).
Uh-oh, did I create PPC economics by accident? xD
Hey there,
Just read your mission and don't worry, it is not boring.
I especially enjoyed the snappy dialogue between the agents.
Gotta love that swear jar.
Sister-to-the-Queen
An great idea. Boy oh boy, if Bleeprin were dimes and this was my school, I'd be RICH RICH freaki- I mean, VERY rich.
That was an awesome mission! Not boring at all. Vampires and lightsaber battles can improve just about anything (though apparently not the original fic).