Subject: Perhaps some Miruvor to fortify you?
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Posted on: 2010-08-01 14:38:00 UTC
I had similar thoughts as well. All things considered the writing's not bad, and 75 chapters is rarely a dedication kept to by younger writers.
It was Elrond's sparkly eyes and the apparent complete disregard of Celebrian (I can't say for certain because I could only bring myself to skim it through) that really froze me.
I know that aff.net is a walking disaster zone but....
The Music in My Heart by Sorsha
Returned to Middle-earth by the Valar, Elrond battles a new claimant to the title of dark lord. With the aid of a beautiful seer, the daughter of his closest friend Erestor, he sets out on a mission of mercy long overdue. Elrond/OFC M/F, M/M, AU
http://lotr.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544183934
Does anyone know if the PPC has interred this darling Sue yet? I looked on PPC Wiki but couldn't find anything.
Thanks
Makayla
This feels to me to be the work of a late-stage suethor... possibly around 17 or something. It's done with at least slight knowlege of canonish things (IE not some 12 year old who watched only the movies) but the author doesn't realize how Mary Sue her characters are.
Reminds me of my own work at 16... Most everything done for AND IT WOULD BE SO COOL IF, rather than something more carefully thought out. *shudder*
I had similar thoughts as well. All things considered the writing's not bad, and 75 chapters is rarely a dedication kept to by younger writers.
It was Elrond's sparkly eyes and the apparent complete disregard of Celebrian (I can't say for certain because I could only bring myself to skim it through) that really froze me.