Subject: re: New mission
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Posted on: 2010-07-12 16:23:00 UTC
Looks good so far. I am interested in seeing how you handle the Sue, as well as what happens to the new recruit...
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New mission by
on 2010-07-12 01:55:00 UTC
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It's the first half of Ian and Lee's newest mission to kill a Twin!Sue infecting the Harry Potter continuum.
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re: New mission by
on 2010-07-12 16:23:00 UTC
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Looks good so far. I am interested in seeing how you handle the Sue, as well as what happens to the new recruit...
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Thank you. by
on 2010-07-12 23:39:00 UTC
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I'm not sure what to do with him. I was thinking maybe putting him in Bad Slash...
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Re: New mission by
on 2010-07-12 07:52:00 UTC
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I know I already said this on another thread, but I know it feels good to get replies on Mission posts, so I'm saying it here, too.
This is a funny mission, which is great considering how messed up the fic is. I think the line that sticks out the most is the one about the Grow your own garden gnome!! (with only two exclamation points).
Lee is growing on me, and I think Ian is really sweet and fun to read about (of course being described as resembling Ronon doesn't hurt him any either :p). -
Aw, thanks. ^^ by
on 2010-07-12 07:59:00 UTC
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Heh. I had fun with the Grow your own garden gnome!!, since I figured that PPC agents probably tend to get some... interesting mail at times.
Ian's by far the more laid back and personable of the two, but Lee's got her moments. This mission marks the beginning of an arc I'm planning, and hopefully it'll help develop them as more concrete characters, Lee especially.
On that note, I was wondering if you wouldn't mind being my sole beta for this arc. I've got secret-ish plans for it, and it shouldn't last more than four, maybe five missions after this one. However, I don't want the overarching plot to be given away via me having multiple betas. If you don't want to, I'm perfectly fine with that.
Thanks!
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Re: Aw, thanks. ^^ by
on 2010-07-12 16:17:00 UTC
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Sure, I'll leave my email in the Google Doc for this story.
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Cool. (nm) by
on 2010-07-12 23:38:00 UTC
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