Subject: Beta
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Posted on: 2010-07-11 16:50:00 UTC
I gave it a twice over, and made a few comments. Your grammar seems to be better than mine (which granted doesn't necessarily say much), but you might want someone that actually knows grammar to check it out.
It is funny. Lee and Ian's interactions are great.
I'm interested to see how David will turn out.
Overall, very nice.
Hey, everyone. I need betas for the first half of this Harry Potter mission I'm in the middle of writing, if anyone's interested. It's on GoogleDocs, but if you can't access it, tell me and I can e-mail it to you.
https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=16DTeigPHets-wyU3aC0kb8fvDuq2MoVCNHxzHyoVEQc&hl=en&authkey=COjYjL4D
I gave it a twice over, and made a few comments. Your grammar seems to be better than mine (which granted doesn't necessarily say much), but you might want someone that actually knows grammar to check it out.
It is funny. Lee and Ian's interactions are great.
I'm interested to see how David will turn out.
Overall, very nice.
I'm not sure why the single quotes; it's what I've been using for a while now, so it's more of a personal style thing than anything else. As for everything else, thanks for the beta. I'm glad there weren't too many mistakes. ^^