Beta request--Sherlock Holmes and Interlude

Mission Plug x 2 by Miah on 2010-07-04 07:52:00 UTC Reply

Agents Kelok and Unger's second mission Turtles?
In which Kelok and Unger must save Moriarty and Holmes from comedy gone wrong.
Beta'd by doctorlit--Thank you very much.

And their third mission Rainbow What!? NSFW, NSFB (NC-17 rated badfic)
In which Kelok and Unger learn what makes the sound "giggle, giggle, scuttle." (Now get your mind out of the gutter, and click the link.)
Beta'd by Goldenrod111--Thank you for the excellent help

Beta request--Sherlock Holmes and Interlude by Miah on 2010-07-06 00:31:00 UTC Reply

I have a solo mission with Kelok going to this fic When gods wish to punish us Sherlock Holmes nothing graphic involved.

Headaches

And then there is an interlude with primarily Unger, but guest appearances by Miah and Cali.

Unger Takes a Walk

As per normal for me, I'm looking for help with spelling, grammar, style, and for the mission the technical facts of Sherlock Holmes and any British terminology that I have accidentally Americanized.

Both of the stories have HTML codes in line in some places, this is intentional as a help for when I post them to LJ.

I know I'm crazy, but I'm on a mission writing spree.
Yay! by Neshomeh on 2010-07-05 18:09:00 UTC Reply

... I'm starting to really like Unger. He's cute. ^^ Poor Kelok, though! I'm glad he got a break between #2 and #3.

Mini-Hound of the Baskervilles = win. Who knew a slobbery green monster could be so adorable? I like the buttons, too. ^^

Keep it up!

~Neshomeh
I like. by Calista on 2010-07-05 13:57:00 UTC Reply

Already said so on the chat, but these are very funny. I pity your agents for having to go through that. And poor Holmes and Watson!
Re: Mission Plug x 2 by doctorlit on 2010-07-05 05:11:00 UTC Reply

Seriously, how are you finding all these badfics? I thought I had searched the Sherlock Holmes section of the Pit more thoroughly...

That NSFW fic is another where, even though we aren't supposed to badmouth the authors, I must say "Whoa, did that author's note just say he takes drugs and has hallucinations?" I almost want to think he was a troll, but the story doesn't seem like trollfic...

I'm so glad you made the Hound of the Baskervilles the Mini for Sherlock Holmes! I hope my agents will get to find one eventually, too!

Re: Mission Plug x 2 by Miah on 2010-07-06 14:27:00 UTC Reply

The two worst ones were from Adult FFnet, and an open LJ community. Though the Turtles one was on FFnet. It really isn't that easy to find badfic, even the stuff that is crazy tends to be really well written and justified. It seems like it makes the bad stuff tend toward the really bad.