Subject: MINE.
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Posted on: 2010-06-29 22:07:00 UTC
If I were a wolf, I'd be growling over my kill-to-be right now.
...Hoo boy. Nearly a full-cast exorcism, navigating Generic Surface, an emergency trip to Medical, and since Odin has developed a personality, emotions and lips, I think I get to kill a giant mecha character replacement that can shoot lightning around. This'll be a challenge of a mission.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5960664/1/bFinalbbFantasybbXIIIbRaceforVictory
What's with these fics; just lines of dialogue? It's like an MSN conversation. A very poorly written one. On drugs.
Script format! Make it go away... *whimpers*
Last I heard, people aren't supposed to post stories in script format. Precisely because of the reactions we're seeing here, I assume.
~Neshomeh
Although really, that's the absolute least of the problems. The sheer disregard for the characters bothers me the most.
My description was "The IRC roleplay conversation from hell, now with 20% more hallucinogens!"
I... guh... what...
Why on earth did I read the entire thing through? I could hear my brain cells scream as they died...
Think Nostalgia Chick's reaction to the final battle scene in Beauty and the Beast: The Enchanted Christmas, and you pretty much have an idea of what my brain did while reading this.
If I were a wolf, I'd be growling over my kill-to-be right now.
...Hoo boy. Nearly a full-cast exorcism, navigating Generic Surface, an emergency trip to Medical, and since Odin has developed a personality, emotions and lips, I think I get to kill a giant mecha character replacement that can shoot lightning around. This'll be a challenge of a mission.