Subject: Right, fixed it.
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Posted on: 2010-06-20 23:18:00 UTC
So, I took into consideration what you said, and quite a bit of it made sense. I fixed what I thought were the most glaring errors- charging in front of canons, etc,- and put the revised version on LJ.
Ian and Lee kill a rather annoying Kid!Sue infecting the CSI: 'Verse in the latest of their missions.
A slightly OT-note: I tend to read and write pretty quickly; a four-day period between "official" mission logs will probably be my vague standard at the moment, though that might change in the near future. If I'm going too fast, please feel free to tell me. I'll try to do my best with asking for betas and so on, and I always welcome con-crit of the non-flame-y type.
I used to write missions in a few days time. It's the main reason why me posting average is still a little below once a month, even though I've only posted two missions in the past four months.
Well, I suppose I'll just have to wait and see,then. It'll probably slow down once school starts back up again in the fall, but during the summer, I'll probably be posting quite a bit.
I had read your mission in the google doc and made some comments in it, I believe before you posted it as a mission. That is, I started before you announced the mission. If I calculate the time difference correctly, my reading and commenting on the mission coincided with you posting the mission. Which explains why none of my comments or corrections was reflected / showed in the posted mission.
So, uhm, I guess my review of this mission can be found in your google doc. ;-)
So, I took into consideration what you said, and quite a bit of it made sense. I fixed what I thought were the most glaring errors- charging in front of canons, etc,- and put the revised version on LJ.
Heh. I'll take a look at it and edit as needed. That's the good thing about using LJ, I suppose; it's easy to edit stuff.