Subject: Re: Hurray!
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Posted on: 2010-06-20 01:40:00 UTC
'A harried-looking Cali was revealed, his vibrant blue hair mussed up even more than usual, which was saying something, given that on any normal day some of the better descriptors of his hair could be "sentient and possibly trying to escape".'
That was my favorite part there. I loved that description of his hair.
Ahem. As promised, your mini:
The Delivering of a Mini.
Hope you enjoy Abbey!
-Pretzel
I laughed the whole way through. Thank you!
I'm glad I made you laugh. I was slightly worried about writing your characters without knowing exactly how to write them, so I'm glad there aren't any complaints on that front. ^^;
'A harried-looking Cali was revealed, his vibrant blue hair mussed up even more than usual, which was saying something, given that on any normal day some of the better descriptors of his hair could be "sentient and possibly trying to escape".'
That was my favorite part there. I loved that description of his hair.
Aw, thanks! I had fun writing that bit. Actually, I had fun writing the whole thing.
Would it be okay to put a link to that story on my agents' pages?
That would be perfectly fine. ^^