Well, it ain't the greatest thing the Pit has churned out, but...it isn't nearly as bad as the reviewers are insisting. Actually, most of them think it's pretty good, except for AJW, who doesn't have an account and who therefore should be distrusted instinctively, and hitherehi62, who is the same person as AJW and only joined so they could flame people without getting deleted. And the author is being very polite and good-natured about the whole thing, suprisingly enough, and though they admit they wrote it in a rush, they don't use it to excuse their mistakes.

Okay okay okay. Long story short: in my opinion, not badfic. Not exactly goodfic either, but this author needs a beta, not a spork to the eye or trollflames up the nose.