I'm still not set up for taking a Mission (it's finals time and I can't spare a brain cell between now and week after next), but...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5572690/1/Loveklok

MotherDUCK, make the hurty-pain STOP. Please. Decent enough understanding of the English language. ABSOLUTE Mary Sue; typical Emo Kid crybaby got beat up by Daddy.

Oh, and her bedroom looks like the inside of the Dethlimo.

Flaming Denethor, somebody HELP!