Ah, very nice sporking job, and glad to see a Nobody agent. I'd like to see more of her.

That story took the "Nobodies can't feel" rule and dragged it straight through the dirt. I may never be free of the mental imagery of motherly!Larxene.

I got the feeling the author was a little bit of a misandrist, what with making Axel a pervert, Demyx a bumbling flirt, and Xaldin completely effeminate, not to mention motherly!Larxene again.

I also couldn't figure out what the sisters' pre-Organization names were supposed to be. Most combinations of letters seemed to make nonsense sounds.

Oh well. Glad to see we've got a Nobody agent, now.