Subject: Avatar TLA Suefic
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Posted on: 2010-05-11 18:25:00 UTC

"Kiaya's Journey"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5763760/1/Kiayas_Journey

The author seems to have at least a basic grip on spelling, grammar, and punctuation, with a few pretty funny mistakes (Sokka says he's the lead "worrier" in his tribe). However, that doesn't stop her OC from (a) hearing about the return of the Avatar before he even gets out of the iceberg, (b) having preternaturally big mammary glands for a fifteen-year-old, or (c) turning Katara into Captain Obvious.

By the way, can anyone help me figure out how to make the story title into a link, so I don't have to write the title and *then* copy the link? 'Cause I know how sloppy that looks...

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