Subject: Good job
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Posted on: 2010-05-15 07:02:00 UTC
Your agents seem to be fun. You might want to think about doing a mission in the Myst continuum, if you know anything about it. Seems like the kind of game Danny would love, and it would give your agents a bit more friction.
I humbly request permission to be allowed to write for the PPC.
Agent Danny Richardson
Age: 25
Home Continuum: World One
Species: Human
Height: 6’ 2”
Hair: Blond
Eyes: Brown
Weapon Preference: Swords
About: Danny's a literati through and through. He loves nothing more than to find somewhere nice and private with novels thick enough to crack nuts with, so its a bit odd that he's ended up in the Video Game Division of the Department of Mary Sues. He's collected and disciplined, and prefers to go in to a situation with a plan already laid out. He's not above a little good natured ribbing now and then, particularly with his quick-to-anger partner. His clothing usually consists of a black cardigan over a shirt-and-tie ensemble. The one thing that REALLY breaks Danny's calm is poor spelling and grammar. Do not mix up "your" and "you're" around him. We're talking heavy violence.
Agent Laura Dukes
Age: 22
Species: Human
Home Continuum: World One
Height: 5’ 10”
Hair: Red
Eyes: Blue
Weapon Preference: Daggers
About: Laura's a surly troublemaker with a passion for video games, particularly FPSs and RPGs. Her attitude has been described by some as 'aggressive' and by the rest as 'somewhat caustic;' she's been known to scream and curse at those who get on her bad side. Sometimes even those on her good side. She tends to operate on twitch reflexes, which can result in her leaping in and winging it much of the time (much to the distress of her superiors). Laura loves a good practical joke, provided she's not on the receiving end. She dresses casually: long sleeved shirt and jeans most of the time.
A sample pre-mission vignette staring my agents is at http://vgdivision.livejournal.com/582.html#cutid1/. More writing samples can be found at http://poorcynic.livejournal.com/.
Your agents seem to be fun. You might want to think about doing a mission in the Myst continuum, if you know anything about it. Seems like the kind of game Danny would love, and it would give your agents a bit more friction.
Oh, wait. Yes I am. Permission granted! {= D
~Neshomeh
But I also enjoyed that a lot, and hope to hear more from your agents in future.
I'm no Permission Giver, but I like your Agents, and the interlude had me laughing all the way through. I like it, and I think you've captured the spirit of the PPC very well indeed. Good luck!