Subject: Re: Interlude plug!
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Posted on: 2010-05-02 04:28:00 UTC
I like the conversation in part one. The flow of the dialogue seems to speed up and get more fluid as Teek starts to get more comfortable talking to the Raiders. It really put me into the story!
We just can't help ourselves. This is another interlude with our most recently partnered Agents, Teek Virtanen and Kayla Richards. It began as a little RP session, but eventually grew interesting enough that we stopped and tried writing it as a proper interlude.
The result is this. Teek meets some of Kayla's friends and finds out that there are friendly people in the PPC.
The interlude is posted on both our LJs, in two parts as it was looooong.
Lycaenion's LJ: Part one and part two.
And Cassie's: Part one and part two
Hope you get some sort of entertainment out of it. We certainly did. :D
I like the conversation in part one. The flow of the dialogue seems to speed up and get more fluid as Teek starts to get more comfortable talking to the Raiders. It really put me into the story!
Part of the idea behind the piece was to get Teek talking to people properly again; for a good part of her time in the PPC so far she's really not had many friendly faces around.
I'm glad you liked it! :D