Indeed. by
Tomato
on 2010-04-21 14:37:00 UTC
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The vampire one isn't horrible--I mostly chose it for its similarities to the fic Moon came from. And it suffers from "this victim is exsanguinated, there must be vampires" syndrome, despite the fact that Babylon 5 characters would think of half a dozen explanations before latching on "vampire."
But the planet of magical unicorns, complete with names out of Mercedes Lackey, who magically resurrect a major canon character (and all this in the first chapter)? Yeah, it's every bit as bad as it sounds. Probably worse.