I've been inspired by March Madness to go back through and finish the other mission I've had in progress for the last four or so years.

Problem is, the fic in question is 10,000 words long and pretty awful (the Mouth of Sauron, a dragon, vampire cannibal elves, multiple Stus, a Maia Vampire Sue, Radagast as a grizzly bear and his pet lynx, oh my!).

Half the mission is four years old, and most of the rest has been written very late at night, and so I'd appreciate if someone could have a look over it and check for stylistic cohesion between the new and old sections. Plus, I always seem to get quotation rules muddled up.

Any takers? I'd be happy to beta read in return.

Elcalion, inspired