Great mission. Loved the chemistry between your agents. Can't wait to read more.

I liked it quite a bit (and was able to understand it, having played WoW for a bit at one point before I got here).

Hm, I wonder what happened to the heads of the people they killed... *snicker*

That is not what a female Orc should be like!

That was fun! Your agents have good chemistry, which makes for good dialogue. Their accents are fun to read, too, but don't intrude on the pace of the writing. I do wish you had included the mistakes from the original fic that caused some of the weird stuff to happen during the "history" segment; it sounds like that author resisted using logic whenever possible.

Now, I will go back to NOT thinking about the physical description of that Sue!Orc...

I have seen parts of this before, but not the whole thing, so:

I like it. ^^ Frankly, I think you're better at this than I am, since ridiculousness comes more naturally to you than it does to me, as manifested in much of Agent Barid's antics and the physical incarnations of errors in the badfic.

I don't think you actually went into what Agent Barid does with the dead Sue and Paladin, though. The bodies ended up in Molten Core, but what of the heads? You might want to go into that a bit.

The agents' accents might necessitate the use of a style sheet for future reference, so they stay more or less consistent. I'll probably make that when I actually edit the mission. ^^

~Neshomeh