Subject: Nice
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Posted on: 2010-03-22 04:18:00 UTC
I loved the bathtub. That was a fun idea. I do not know any French, so I never would have caught that as more than random spelling.
I did not notice the seam between the two sections.
That was a noxious Sue with the strange relationships.
I was beginning to think I'd never actually finish a mission, but my 4 year mission drought has ended.
Those who were around way back in 2006 may remember this fic, which was hilariously MST'ed by Boz4PM. Around about the same time I started to PPC it, got half way... and then left it for three and a half years. I've done my best not to steal too many jokes from Boz's MST, but may have inadvertently done so.
Tonight, I sat down and finished it, as my contribution to March Madness. (Hopefully the change between the two sections isn't too jarring.)
It can be found here. It hasn't been beta-ed as yet, and I'm sure there're a few formatting things that haven't come out in the wash html, but comments most appreciated.
Elcalion, pluggering.
I loved the bathtub. That was a fun idea. I do not know any French, so I never would have caught that as more than random spelling.
I did not notice the seam between the two sections.
That was a noxious Sue with the strange relationships.
You missed something near the beginning. When you were describing the buildings in "rivindell" you said "and there was a large looked suspiciously too much like a palace for the Agents' liking."
Well, it's nice to know that there's people out there who can put a firm end to this sort of thing. Why is the words brother-uncle just send a chill down my spine?
By the way, Neshomeh, if it's ok I'd like to request a drawing of Agent Logan. I have no artistic talent to speak of, so would be nice to have a drawing of him.
Elcalion, artistically-challenged.
English already HAS a word for a staircase that leads forward. We call that a BRIDGE.
That was definitely the strangest portrayal of Boromir I have ever read. He's both borderline evil AND the lust object at the same time. Weird.