Subject: My biggest criticism...
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Posted on: 2010-03-14 23:12:00 UTC
... is that you have to read so much of the original fic. >.>
The banter is infinitely more entertaining than the actual story. I think the sporking would actually be better served by your characters paraphrasing the entries rather than having comments interspersed between them.
...are up at my livejournal. I would love to see you there.
Critiques would also be nice.
http://terrofen.livejournal.com/
... is that you have to read so much of the original fic. >.>
The banter is infinitely more entertaining than the actual story. I think the sporking would actually be better served by your characters paraphrasing the entries rather than having comments interspersed between them.
On the journals?
It makes it easier to navigate the main page of your journal and people's friends lists without crazy-ton of scrolling.
I'll go do that right now!
Thank you