Subject: Other ways.
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Posted on: 2009-12-24 23:43:00 UTC

What I do is focus on a few important details and leave the rest up to the reader's imagination. I almost always give basic eye and hair color with perhaps one adjective each, no more, but a lot of times you can just give the basic complexion, like swarthy or fair, and it's up to the reader to know that swarthy usually means dark eyes and dark hair, and that fair usually means a blue-eyed blond. I may offer the structure of a person's face if it's distinctive--square-jawed, round-faced, etc. I rarely if ever describe clothing unless it's important, as in a situation where the character is dressing for a certain effect or purpose, and then I'll stick to the one or two articles that specifically make the look. (Though if you have a particularly flamboyant character, they tend to break those rules for you.) The trick is to chose your words very carefully, and pick the one that means exactly what you want instead of a whole bunch that dance around the point.

Another thing is that all the details don't have to be given right away if they don't fit in with the moment, for any character. You can string out the description in bits and pieces for as long as it takes to do it gracefully. If you win the readers over with the character's personality, they'll wait for the details.

I hope that helps. I feel like I'm not being very clear, but so much of writing is subjective that it's hard.

~Neshomeh

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