Subject: put it up please
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Posted on: 2009-12-16 00:34:00 UTC
Hmmm, dying fur works, well the hair. but i guess her name i now Cheri. most likely as a Nurse, or working in counseling. and will be keeping her away from lux, we hope.
http://chelonianmobile.livejournal.com/87976.html
Rated R, as before. Contains link to the first part in case anyone's not read it yet.
Renamed Sakura-bunny (we're thinking "Cherry") probably won't make a field agent, but we reckon she'd be good in the Nursery. I do think more non-assassin agents would be a good thing, everyone seems to concentrate on the "blowing stuff up" aspect and not the HQ work (obviously the blowing-up-stuff is easier to make fun, but the HQ stuff is worth a try). She needs a makeover to make her look less like Sakura in aspects other than the rabbit ears, so we'll have to work on that.
Nice to see you got the next part up, and I can't WAAIT fro this squick-fest to be slain!
The ONLY thing I do sorta like about it are the cute animal versions of the characters, but the Bad Biology turns me off. (Seriously, even *I* know that's not how the body works!)
As for Sakura-bunny (Cheri, is it?), maybe you could give her some highlights (what goes well with pink?), or maybe style her hair differently, I dunno.
I think they're right.
Ooh! Ooh! Dye her hair/fur blue! Or something...
This gender confusion with Naruto is really getting to me. It makes my brain hurt.
I think I might draw that last scene with Sakura and Drake... 's cute. Just for fun I started MSTing this, too. I might put it up on my DA or something, if that's okay with you. (I avoided using jokes you already used). Of course, I'd have to wait til my mom lets me have my sites back so I don't have to access them via proxy site.(Currently I'm typing this from a school computer.)
Ooh... Cherry... I made a cherry joke in my own MST. Heh.
As for the Sues... rip them apart. Please. I can't stand what they've done to Sasuke-kun. KILL THEM ALL!
Put the MSTing on LJ, not devArt. DA get pissy about explicit content, and if this doesn't qualify as explicit content I don't know what does.
Hmmm, dying fur works, well the hair. but i guess her name i now Cheri. most likely as a Nurse, or working in counseling. and will be keeping her away from lux, we hope.
Don't worry about sharing jokes, though if you steal one directly put in a credit in the Author's Note. And I would absolutely love to see the drawing of the last scene. I think the kittensquick fic's author actually drew the critters himself, I'll see if I can track down the picture ...
Did you see what I told mafoxfire about what the person on the other LJ said about this guy's attitude to women? Creepy f***er. I think they will have to drag him and the Stus into the abandoned Temple and have every female in the PPC and the Naruto OFU take turns at castrating them, then reattaching the bits with Doc Fitz's equipment and doing it again. We didn't end up doing that to Uoikih despite the Spear Incident or the "I enjoy spelling Brian Jacques' first name wrong because I am a pretentious little snot", because creepy as her fic was there was at least no hint that she might really believe you can or should do anything she depicted. This guy, though ...
I just read both parts. DEAR SWEET MOTHER OF LOGIC. My brain is a LOBSTER flibble wheep please insert cheese?
GAH.
... Excuse me. *leaves room; a few seconds later, loud banging noises can be heard through the wall, which is developing a suspiciously head-sized lump*
*comes back*
Okay, better.
Just one question: Cherry like the fruit? 'Cause that's awfully... well, cute. And there's cuteness overload as it is. I dunno.
Anyhow, carry on with the sporking. I think you should introduce them to Cesar Milan and/or Jo Frost, but then again, I LIKE Cesar Milan and Jo Frost, so maybe not. {= P
GAH.
~Neshomeh
Might change it to "Cheri", if you think it's too cutesy.
Glad you like the sporking!
At the moment 'Cheri' as a name makes me think of the previous Maou from Kyou Kara Maou: a woman who's rather free with her affections, has at least three sons by as many men, and is spending her retirement from being queen of the demons travelling the world to look for love.
Actually, that would be an awesome name for the Sakura-thing.
It just makes me think of Cheery/Cheri Littlebottom from Discworld.
Cheri it is, then.