My brain hurts.. by
Maya De'Lune
on 2009-06-26 06:47:00 UTC
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I just read the whole thing. I know you read it to me over the phone, but honestly, it was far worse to read. I am so sorry you ever were forced through that. But at least you put it to rights....I can almost sleep easy. And remind me, (should we ever enter zero gravity) to try to quickly saunter. But it was very funny. I giggled much.
Good mission! by
Vixenmage
on 2009-06-25 06:14:00 UTC
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The Tortall-verse is rife with such horrors, I know.
Just a minor nitpick: “Hello there,” she murmured, scratching it behind it’s ears. “What are we going to call you, hmmm?”
No apostrophe in the "its". That's a weird pronoun, but "it's" is only used for a contraction of "it" and "is." There is no apostrophe for making the pronoun possessive.
Other than that, good job. I'm not as familiar with the Provost's Dog series as any of her other Tortall works, but I do know that that version of Beka is about as OOC as it gets. Nice kill.
Good Job by
Helen of Pylos
on 2009-06-25 05:52:00 UTC
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There's a whole slew of badfic to wade through in the Tortallverse. Well done with this one and good luck on further missions.
Could I have a Pigin? by
Cinnia Aine
on 2009-06-24 17:04:00 UTC
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The mission was very amusing, aside from the fact that the author who wrote the badfic obviously hadn't proofread her work. The Pigins seem cute. I'd like one for my agents, if possible. (I would mention the existence of a Pigin in their RC as a snippet between the first and second missions, as soon as I get around to writing them. That is, if you don't mind your Agents being mentioned as the ones who gave the Pigin.) Congrats on your first mission!
Wow, you wrote quickly. by
kgarrett
on 2009-06-24 11:22:00 UTC
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I've never heard of the fandom, but it was a pretty entertaining mission, if a bit odd with the Agent(s?). Seems like it could be a really good spinoff given time, keep up the good work.
I want a Pidgin! by
Buta
on 2009-06-24 04:34:00 UTC
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Not for any Agents, for myself. Is that fine? Oh, and do Pidgins show the ability to learn simplified mash-ups of different languages?
Just reading now :) by
The Trojanhorse
on 2009-06-23 23:36:00 UTC
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And any Pidgins that don't find homes are welcome at the Cute Animal Friend Adoption Agency :D
