Now I'm sure everyone is thinking 'Who the heck is this guy again?'- but I haven't just upped and disappeared. It's taken a long-long time since getting Permission, but I have FINALLY completed my first mission.

That said, I need somebody with a fairly good knowledge of the Metal Gear series (specifically the more recent games) to take a look over it and check everything is alright. As well as that, seenas this is my first outing, hopefully somebody who could set me straight on anything I've got wrong procedurally as well.

Let me know if you can help here, and we can go from there.

Many thanks!