Frankly, I don't have the time to look through this as it's expanded rapidly. It's a rewrite of one of this author's old N&C fics, which I objected to on sheer suckage factor by changing the ending to be a happy one and therefore ruining the entire message of the book. She then rewrote the story, coming to me for beta reading help. I accepted. She fired me about three days later because I pointed out plothole after plothole (and a number of biology errors, too). To my knowledge, she only kept the spelling and grammar erros (of which there were a lot). What I saw of it and the author's attitude makes me think badfic was imminent. Therefore, I'm flagging this so someone else can read it and see if my suspicions were correct.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4763715/1/